I really enjoyed this! I think you did a fantastic job :) I was wondering if I could use this for my youtube videos? I do speed paintings and I would really love to use this song for them.
I agree with GamerTheory on that when the instrument at 0:50 pops in, it's too strong and too abrupt. However, I feel that if that element were introduced earlier, and a bit of a heavier beat put in from the get go, it could become a very positive addition to this song.
This is a very nice piece in that it is mellow and calming. After a while though, it becomes mildly repetitive. However, it does not become so repetitive that it makes me want to stop listening, in fact, it is pretty relaxing. Overall, this is a pretty nice song. In the future though, watch out for repetitiveness, or it will become a detrimental element in your work.
Thanks you for the feedback :D
I've realized most of my songs do this, so I do need to work on it a bit.
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